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Sixth Class 2010-2011

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Creative Writing


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MILLIONS OF FOOTPRINTS


I was walking in through the bushes.

After walking eight miles I was curious about what could be in front of me. I decided to investigate Further. Suddenly I saw dwarves walking into the cave tomb. I asked myself should I go in or not? Suddenly I saw ten dwarves dissecting Five mummies. I screamed! They heard me, They caught me and threw me into a chamber. Luckily I found a knife in my pocket and waited ...

until all the dwarves fell asleep.

As they were snoring loudly they never heard me picking the lock and escaping.

The next day I brought the police to the cave but the dwarves had disappeared. The police wouldn’t believe my story but I know that it is true!

THE END


by David and Darragh



My Unusual Pet


My pet has to be one of the most unusual pets ever in the world. I mean he mews like a cat, hops like a rabbit and dances like a human. He just
…… I don’t even know what you would call him. A rabbit, a cat, a freestyle dancer? I just don’t know and the worst part is that he and my sister’s dog have just had eight beautiful pups.

The only bad part is they all take after their father. And they all have one green and blue eye. Trust me, you don’t want to wake up and see a huge dog with glowing eyes. Scary !!

by Jessica

The Candy Floss Clouds


The Candy Floss clouds are snow white
and like marrsmallows that flow across the sky
in all different shapes and sizes.
As fluffy as pillows as white as snow.
When I look at the clouds it reminds me of bed, you know.

By Ciara


The Return of the Black Beast


I thought it was all over, the noises the creatures, the strange shadows until now. Over the last two weeks my dog, Boomer has been getting bigger and bigger and the red glow in his eyes is increasing. Sometimes I saw him stand on his hind legs in dark corners or rooms. It is like he is mutating into a human.

Anyway I was playing my xbox all night when the power went out. I thought it was just a loose cable but I was terribly wrong.

I was anxious to finish my game so I ran downstairs to the fuse box in the kitchen. When I got there, something really scared me. There was a lethal axe plunged into the fuse box. I quickly grabbed the torch and ran up to my parents’ room. On my way up something stopped me in my tracks.

A black shadow-like man was standing in the hall with a pile of dog hairs beside him At first I thought he had killed my dog but I realised it was my dog as the only visible features on him were a collar and a mechanic jacket. It had no face, just black and another axe in his hand. I shone my torch at his face. He screamed because his face lit up like a bonfire and he started to walk towards me, swinging his axe wildly.

Then I realised he feeds on darkness which seemed to make him stronger. I kept on shining my torch at him when suddenly its battery ran out of power. I had to think fast because the shadow-figure was getting closer.

Then I realised my dad kept a flare gun in the First Aid Kit which was located in the kitchen press. So I quickly ran to the kitchen and reefed the kit from the press. Grabbing the gun, I shot at the figure but the gun backfired and my arm shot up in flames. I screamed as I re-loaded the gun. Finally I pulled the trigger. He burst into flames with a loud roar. He then disintegrated into a pile of ash. I collapsed into a heap on the floor.

When I came around, I was lying on the freezing kitchen floor. I thought it had all been a bad dream, but that’s when I noticed the collar, the axe and the pile of ash on the floor. So …. was it a dream… or not?

Conor



Halloween Creative Writing from 6th Class


Disgusting Poem

Double, double, toil and trouble

Fire burn and cauldron bubble

Fillet of a dangling donkey

In the cauldron boil and bake

Eye of an iguana and toe of dog

Wool of cat and tongue of frog

Mother’s fork and blind snake’s string

Giraffe’s leg and pigeon’s limp wing

For a potion of powerful trouble

Like a hell-broth boil and bubble

Double, double, toil and trouble

Fire burn and cauldron bubble.

by Jessica Mc




Gory Story

Double, double, toil and trouble

Fire burn and cauldron bubble

Fillet of a poisonous snake

In the cauldron it will bake

Eye of mouse and toe of dog

Wool of cat and tongue of frog

Adder’s fork and blind worm’s sting

Lizard’s skin and owlet’s wing

For a charm of powerful trouble

Like a hell-broth boil and bubble

Double, double toil and trouble

Fire burn and cauldron bubble.

by Caitlin


Halloween Story

Double double toil and trouble


Fire burn and cauldron bubble


Rabbit’s head – make sure its dead


Chicken legs hung up by pegs


Frog’s toe, his name must be Joe


People’s hands and lucky bands


Dragon’s scales and cat’s twisted tails


This is so bloody and gory


I hoped you liked my Halloween story


Jake


On Halloween Night


On Halloween night monsters rise

Loving the chance to terrorise People at home all snug in their bed

They did not know they could soon be dead

Witches fly high on their broom

Mummys rise from their tomb

Ghosts float in the air

Giving people a dreadful scare

The rattle of skeletons bones

The noisy sound of Zombie moans

When the sun rises the very next day

There are no more frights

Another 365 days until Halloween night.

Conor




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